10 feb2025
학생이 쓴 원문
HOMEWORK FOR TODAY:
Writing task: Are people in your country generally close to their families?
Answer :
I think that most Koreans have a strong sense of family ties, likely due to Confucian values. There is a belief that one should respect and care for their parents, and people tend to place great importance on their relationships with them. However, I am not very close to my parents. I think we were close when I was younger, but after getting married and having children, I started to reflect on my parents\' behavior during my childhood. This made me resolve to be kind and loving to my child, which I believe has led to some distance between my parents and me.
강사 첨삭
Hello, Ms. [이름]! I believe, it’s natural for relationships to evolve, especially as you go through major life changes. Sometimes, as you experience new stages of life, you start to see things from a different perspective and notice behaviors that may not have been as clear to you when you were younger.
-T. Sonny
I think that most Koreans have a strong sense of family ties, likely due to Confucian values.>>Correct!
There is a belief that one should respect and care for their parents, and people tend to place great importance on their relationships with them.
>>Correct!
However, I am not very close to my parents.
>>Correct!
I think we were close when I was younger, but after getting married and having children, I started to reflect on my parents\' behavior during my childhood.
>>Correct!
This made me resolve to be kind and loving to my child, which I believe has led to some distance between my parents and me.
>>Correct!
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