100 years from now

2012-06-18 · 첨삭 강사 Jane

학생이 쓴 원문

Hi, Alice! I'm sorry to cancle my class. I was very busy last week because a Japaness professor visited our office for business. I had to contact him and prepare meeting handouts at the same time. After he came, I attend a seminar with him and had dinner together. Next day, Our team members and I discussed some works with him. But It was great time to me because he and I talk in English and he was a nice person. Anyway the important thing is that I did homework written below. I imagened the world 100 years from now. Most people in the world will speak in English and other language almost will disappear. Contries in Europe will make the intergrated contry and Asia, Africa also will make that. Most people will can travel anywhere freely even though out of the earth. Also we will meet ailians and we will can live together as movies "Man In Black".

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]! Glorious Monday! I understand why you had to cancel your class. And I appreciate that you still find time to do your homework despite being busy. Anyway, here are  my corrections for your composition. If you have some clarifications feel free to ask. See you in class, have a nice day ahead. ^^.   I\'m sorry to cancle my class. >>I\'m sorry to cancel my class. I was very busy last week because a Japaness professor visited our office for business. >>I was very busy last week because a Japanese professor visited our office for business purposes.  I had to contact him and prepare meeting handouts at the same time. >>I had to contact him and prepare the meeting handouts at the same time. After he came, I attend a seminar with him and had dinner together. >>When he came, we attended a seminar and had some dinner together Next day, Our team members and I discussed some works with him. >>The following day, me and the rest of the team members discussed some works with him. But It was great time to me because he and I talk in English and he was a nice person. >>It was a great time for me because we talked in English and he was a nice person. Anyway the important thing is that I did homework written below. >>Anyway, the important thing is that I did my homework and it is written below. I imagened the world 100 years from now. >>Viewing the world 100 years from now. OR >>If I am to imagine the world 100 years from now. Most people in the world will speak in English and other language almost will disappear. >>Most people in the world will speak in English and the rest of the languages will disappear. Contries in Europe will make the intergrated contry and Asia, Africa also will make that. >>Countries in Europe will be integrated and so with Asia and Africa. Most people will can travel anywhere freely even though out of the earth. >>Most people will be travelling freely, even in outer space. Also we will meet ailians and we will can live together as movies \"Man In Black\". >>We can also meet aliens and live with them together just like in the movie \"Man In Black\".      

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