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2023-04-14 · 첨삭 강사 Beth

학생이 쓴 원문

[introduce your friend] Let me introduce my best friend ‘Kim minsol’ to you. I have known her for a long time since I was five years old. It has passed more than 10 years. I think she is kind and also she makes her friend laugh. She is really good at singing so she was a member of musical club. Also when I had a problem , she always gave me good methods to solve. So she is both good at singing a song and suggesting some solutions. We had a pajama party all through the night in my house. If she is sick, I would like to make a soup for her. I want her to keep in touch anytime anywhere.

강사 첨삭

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Let me introduce my best friend ‘Kim minsol’ to you.
>>>   correct
I have known her for a long time since I was five years old.
>>>  correct
>>> OR: I have known her for a while since we were five years old.
It has passed more than 10 years.
>>> OR: It has been ten years since then. 
I think she is kind and also she makes her friend laugh.
>>>  OR: I think he is kind and she also makes her friends laugh.
>>> OR: I think she is kind and also humorous.
She is really good at singing so she was a member of musical club.
>>> She is really good at singing so she was a member of the musical club. 
Also when I had a problem , she always gave me good methods to solve.
>>> Also when I had a problem , she always gave me good methods to solve it. 
So she is both good at singing a song and suggesting some solutions.
>>> correct  
We had a pajama party all through the night in my house.
>>> correct
If she is sick, I would like to make a soup for her.
>>> correct 
I want her to keep in touch anytime anywhere.
>>> correct
>>> OR: I want to keep in touch with her anytime and anywhere.

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