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This is thought-provoking for women, [이름]!

Yes, our thoughts are parallel. Let\'s remind ourselves that make-up is just a cover up, and personality is more important. Your ideas are unstoppable. Keep on writing more compositions!

~Teacher Eunice

Do you like taking selfies? Why or why not?
>>> correct!

I liked taking selfies but I don\'t like taking selfies now.

>>> I used to like taking selfies, but not anymore.

I was a selfie fanatic so I took selfies a lot.

>>> correct!

I loved my makeup face.

>>> I loved covering my face with make-up.  

I liked my cosmetics so makeup was my hobby.

>>> I used to like cosmetics, so doing makeup was my hobby.  

But I realized it\'s an illusion. So I don\'t have a makeup anymore.

>>> When I realized that it was just an illusion, I then stop buying cosmetics.

The process of hating selfies is natural for me.

>>> correct!

The reason why I wanted to take selfies was that I was not sure about my appearance.

>>> correct!

I took selfies about 10 times a day. But now I take selfies once a week just for memories.

>>> I used to take selfies about 10 times a day, but now, I only take selfies once a week just for memories.

I think makeup is a poison to girls.

>>> correct!

If I want to makeup myself, I should stare at mirror.

>>> If I want to makeup myself, I should stare at the mirror.

It\'s the process that we look for our weakness of our face. So many girls think they have small eyse and fat bodies.

>>> It\'s the process of looking for our flaws on our face, so many girls think that hey have small eyes and fat bodies.

They have many chances to figure out their weakness.

>>> They have many chances to figure out their weaknesses.

>>> OR: They have more time in figuring out their shortcomings than being grateful of their strengths. 

I hope they find the way to love themselves.

>>> I hope they will find a way to love themselves.

>>> OR: I hope they can embrace themselves regardless of their flaws. 

But I like selfies with my friends.

>>>  I like taking selfies with my friends.

I believe it will be our good memories!

>>>  correct!
 PS. I\'m not sure the word \"weakness\" is appropriate.

>>> P.S. I\'m not sure if the word \"weakness\" is appropriate. 

I was told you have high fever.

>>> I was told that you have high fever.

I hope you\'ll be ok.

>>>  correct!