1018homework

Hi [이름]! Thank you for doing your homework. Nice thoughts on this one. You gave a very vivid and clear picture of where you would want to live. Good job! ^ ^

-Teacher Jedah

I\'d like to live in an island like Maldive islands.

>>Correct

I love peaceful place and sea.

>>I love a peaceful place and the sea. 

If i can live in there someday, I\'ll make a barbeque party which can accept my neighberhood.

>>If I can live there someday, I\'ll have a barbeque party where all neighbors are welcome. 

Of course, we will drink beers too!

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And there will be sunny day.

>>And there will be sunny days.

>>Everyday will be a sunny day. 

As you know, weather is important at living space.

>>As you know, weather is important in a place. 

I don\'t like a humid and cloudy day.

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So in my island, we won\'t need to buy a dehumidifier.

>>Correct 

And there will be no disasters like hurricane, earthquake, and typhoon.

>>Correct 

I don\'t want to lose my life because of disasters.

>>Correct or

>>I don\'t want to lose my life because of natural disasters.

I think you aleady know that I love cats.

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So many cats and people will be happy in my island all together.

>>Correct 

Finally, I want a no criminal island.

>>Finally, I want no criminal in my island. 

I don\'t want to survive from criminals.

>>I don\'t want to deal with criminals.

I think it\'s like an utopia.

>>I think it\'s like Utopia.