102. Homework

Whew, reading your paragraph was an instant vacation, Jason^^

Thank you and have a great day!

ESSAY: Is there anything you would like to change about your house?
>>CORRECT!
If I have a chance to change my house without any effort or spending money, then I would like to move home bigger space in GangNam and it would be a kind of private house including swimming pool, garage and garden with a height wall to protect my house from strangers.

>>If I have a chance to change my house without any effort or spending money, then I would like to move  to a home with a bigger space in Gangnam, and it would be a kind of private house including swimming pool, garage and garden with a high wall to protect my house from strangers.

That’s because this kind of house must expensive rather than apartment even if it is also located in Gang Nam.

>>That’s because this kind of house must be more expensive than apartments even if it is also located in Gangnam.

And I will sell it to get plenty of amount money.

>>And I will sell it to get a plenty amount of money.

After that I will move to country side including mountain backside and sea in front of my house.

>>After that, I will move to countryside which has a mountain at the back, and see in front of my house.

And I will buy expensive super car which can open its roof. Or I will spend money trip to other countries instead of buying house in Korea.

>>And I will buy an expensive supercar which has a roof that can be opened, or I will spend money on a trip to other countries instead of buying a house in Korea.

And the other choice, I will build a house which called guest house in Jeju-island and I will have a party every night sharing stories that they have and enjoying for fun.

>>And the other choice, I will build a house which is called guesthouse in Jeju Island, and I will have a party every night sharing stories that the visitors have and enjoying for fun.