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2018-10-24 · 첨삭 강사 Jedah

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If you could only eat one food for the rest of your life, what would it be? Describe it and explain why you’d choose it. I think it's horrible if I could only eat one food for rest of my life. If I could ony ean one food, I'll choose Kimchi stew. It is called Kimchijjigae by Korean. I love chicken but I don't like greasy foods. Most of Korean couldn't live without Kimchi especially to me. I always eat Kimchi at my meal. If I couldn't eat Kimchi, I should look for Kimchi. If I couldn't find them, I'll decide to eat Kimchi next time. The reason why I choose Kimchi stew is simple. Only Kimchi is good for me but if I make it for stew, it's more delicious. We can add tofu, tuna and pepper to Kimchi stew. As you know, I really don't like seafoods, so I'd like to add pork instead of tuna! If I can eat another one in secret, I'll definitely try because I'll sick of it. PS. Happy Tuesday to you Teacher Jedah! My third day work was tiring me but I think it was pretty great. How was your day?

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]! A Wonderful Wednesday to you! Thank you for taking the time writing your homework. ^ ^ 

I like that you are enjoying your work. I hope you will be patient enough to hang on to it and be good at it! ^ ^

So, you chose Kimchi as your forever dish. I think it\'s a good choice. Of course you would choose something that you really like! Great answer! ^ ^



I think it\'s horrible if I could only eat one food for rest of my life.

>>I think it\'s horrible if I could only eat one food for the rest of my life.

If I could ony ean one food, I\'ll choose Kimchi stew.

>>If I could ony eat one food, I\'ll choose Kimchi stew. (correct sentence, typo error with \"eat\")

It is called Kimchijjigae by Korean.

>>It is called Kimchijjigae by Koreans. 

I love chicken but I don\'t like greasy foods.

>>Correct 

Most of Korean couldn\'t live without Kimchi especially to me.

>>Most Koreans couldn\'t live without Kimchi especially me. 

I always eat Kimchi at my meal.

>>I always eat Kimchi during meals.

If I couldn\'t eat Kimchi, I should look for Kimchi.

>>Correct 

If I couldn\'t find them, I\'ll decide to eat Kimchi next time.

>>Correct 

The reason why I choose Kimchi stew is simple.

>>Correct 

Only Kimchi is good for me but if I make it for stew, it\'s more delicious.

>>Only Kimchi is good for me but if I make it into a stew, it\'s more delicious. 

We can add tofu, tuna and pepper to Kimchi stew.

>>Correct

As you know, I really don\'t like seafoods, so I\'d like to add pork instead of tuna!

>>Correct 

If I can eat another one in secret, I\'ll definitely try because I\'ll sick of it.

>>If I can eat another food in secret, I\'ll definitely try because I\'ll be sick of it.

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