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So, you chose Kimchi as your forever dish. I think it\'s a good choice. Of course you would choose something that you really like! Great answer! ^ ^
I think it\'s horrible if I could only eat one food for rest of my life.
>>I think it\'s horrible if I could only eat one food for the rest of my life.
If I could ony ean one food, I\'ll choose Kimchi stew.
>>If I could ony eat one food, I\'ll choose Kimchi stew. (correct sentence, typo error with \"eat\")
It is called Kimchijjigae by Korean.
>>It is called Kimchijjigae by Koreans.
I love chicken but I don\'t like greasy foods.
>>Correct
Most of Korean couldn\'t live without Kimchi especially to me.
>>Most Koreans couldn\'t live without Kimchi especially me.
I always eat Kimchi at my meal.
>>I always eat Kimchi during meals.
If I couldn\'t eat Kimchi, I should look for Kimchi.
>>Correct
If I couldn\'t find them, I\'ll decide to eat Kimchi next time.
>>Correct
The reason why I choose Kimchi stew is simple.
>>Correct
Only Kimchi is good for me but if I make it for stew, it\'s more delicious.
>>Only Kimchi is good for me but if I make it into a stew, it\'s more delicious.
We can add tofu, tuna and pepper to Kimchi stew.
>>Correct
As you know, I really don\'t like seafoods, so I\'d like to add pork instead of tuna!
>>Correct
If I can eat another one in secret, I\'ll definitely try because I\'ll sick of it.
>>If I can eat another food in secret, I\'ll definitely try because I\'ll be sick of it.
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