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You gave a very good opinion on this one. Being an employee who sits eight hours everyday makes me prone to a lot of diseases. Studies show that people who sit all day are prone to developing diseases like: neck and back strain, carpal tunnel syndrome,  posture problems and so many others. So, I guess it\'s a good proposition that employees should be given time to do light exercises at work. ^ ^

-Teacher Jedah

I\'m confused with the word \"exercise\".

>>Correct

Is it means \"work out\" literally?

>>Does it  literally mean to  \"work out\"? 

I wrote it down for that meaning.

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I think it\'s a cool way to improve employees\' morale than no exercise.

>>Correct 

I knew many employees should sit for a long time.

>>A lot of employees sit for a long time. (it sounds better if you state it as a fact) 

So I believe that having exercise time is effective.

>>Correct

But I guess it makes employers to concern about company\'s profit.

>>But I guess it makes employers become more concerned about their profit. 

Setting aside time during the day decreases employees\' work time.

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But most of us are employees, not employers.

>>Correct 

So I want exercise time.

>>So I want an exercise time. 

In my case, I should stand for 5 hours a day.

>>In my case, I stand for five hours a day. 

If I get some time to exercise, it will make me fresh.

>>If I get some time to exercise, it refreshes me. 

Surely, I know doing exercise is hard in a work place.

>>Correct

So I would like to stretch myself.

>>So, a little stretching and a time out at work will do.