1026 homework

Hi [이름]! My favorite student! ^ ^ Thank you for devoting time in writing your homework. Your consistency and persistence in learning and practicing the language is remarkable! Continue so, you will be surprised with the results. ^ ^

It\'s always nice to have a goal and a plan on how to achieve it. It gives you the drive and the reason to get up every morning and strive on! ^ ^

-Teacher Jedah

As you know, improving English skils like speaking, listening, and writing is my priority goals of this year.

>>As you know, improving my English skills like speaking, listening, and writing are my priority goals for this year.

In my dreams, I\'d like to travel around the world.

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And then, I believe I will speak English fluently!

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And my legs are not in a good condition so I\'d like to take care for my legs.

>>And my legs are not in a good condition so I\'d like to take care of my legs.

As a result of rehabilitations about my legs, I want to jump, run, and dance someday.

>>After my leg rehabilitation, I would like to jump, run and dance again.

And I think about immigration and working holiday.

>>And I\'m also thinking about immigration and going on a working holiday.

So I aim to find a job that I easy to immigrate.

>>So I aim to find a job that would be easy for me to immigrate.

I don\'t think it takes less times.

>>I don\'t think it takes less time.

So in this year, I\'ll look for many ways that I can approach.

>>So within this year, I\'ll look for ways to achieve my goal.

If I couldn\'t find the way, I have an idea about domestic job.

>>If I couldn\'t find a way, I will consider domestic jobs.

And I\'d like to meet many people who are in different fields.

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I think it\'s important to meet a lot of people.

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Someday, it will help me if I\'m in a trouble.

>>Someday, they may be able to help me when I\'m in trouble. 

I think it helps myself to write down my goals!

>>I think it is very helpful if I write down my goals.

Thanks for this homework.

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