1031 homework

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You made a vivid imagination on how the world would be without rules. A world with no rules would be chaotic, as you have described it. Rules are very important. They provide a stable environment and human co existence. One thing though, I couldn\'t quite follow what you mean with your last five sentences about \"speciality.\" ^ ^

-Teacher Jedah 

I think it would be chaos.

>>I think there would be chaos.

>>I think the world would be chaotic. 

Rules are controlling us for a long time.

>>Rules have been controlling us for a long time. 

We must not murder, steal, and take drugs.

>>Correct

If there are no rules, those criminals are allowed!

>>Correct or

>>If there are no rules, it means crimes committed are allowed and acceptable. 

But if all criminals are forbidden, I think it\'s cool.

>>Correct

Imagine the world that everyone\'s dream come true.

>>Imagine a world where everyone\'s dreams come true.

I\'ll be fluent in English and be a rich person even I don\'t make an effort to that.

>>I\'ll be fluent in English and be a rich person even if I don\'t make an effort to achieve that. 

I know it\'s every workers\' dream especially me.

>>Correct

If no one worries about money, everyone will be kind because they don\'t have to worry about their food expenses, electricity fees, and educational expenses.

>>Correct

And they don\'t have to compete with others.

>>Correct

But I wonder that it is possible because people want similar things.

>>But I wonder if it is possible because people want similar things. 

They will want to be a rich, professional, or perheps be a hero.

>>They will want to be rich, professionals, or perhaps be a hero.

Finally I think speciality can be normal.

>>Correct (your sentence is correct, but I don\'t quite understand what you mean ^ ^)

What if people want to be pool because thet want to be special?

>>What if people want to be poor because they want to be special? (correct sentence, typo error with \"poor\" and \"they\") 

What if people want to be ugly?

>>Correct

I think it will be repeated.

>>Correct (I wonder what would be repeated? ^ ^)

As time goes, values will change.

>>Correct