104. Homework

ESSAY: What kind of problems bother you every day? Few days ago, a companion ordered me sending e-mail to the foreigner finding an item that we needed to. And after that situation, he always instructs to write something using English to the other company. He said I am good at formal writing and he guessed I used to work this kind of mailing since I worked for sales department even few period day. Furthermore, he told other companions that I was the best English e-mail writer in our department, and it brings situations that, sometimes, others also asked me a favor. Moreover, they expect that I am able to speak English through phone call. I know I am not good at English writing enough, and I don’t have enough confidence about calling to foreigner on the phone. So it gives me a full of stress. But I have to do that since company gives me salary every month for a work including these situations. And even if I am having hard time now, I may be improved with this and it will not bother me anymore.

Hi [이름],  Kindly check the corrections I made to help you better. Try to read each sentence aloud. Few days ago, a companion ordered me sending e-mail to the foreigner finding an item that we needed to. >>Few days ago, my colleague asked me to send an email to one of the foreign distributors to check if the item we need is available. And after that situation, he always instructs to write something using English to the other company. >>After that, he always instructs me to write to companies in English. He said I am good at formal writing and he guessed I used to work this kind of mailing since I worked for sales department even few period day. >> He said I am good at formal writing and he guessed I used to handle emails since I used to work in the sales department. Furthermore, he told other companions that I was the best English e-mail writer in our department, and it brings situations that, sometimes, others also asked me a favor. >> Furthermore, he told my other colleagues that I was the best English email responder in our department and I lead others to ask favour from me.   Moreover, they expect that I am able to speak English through phone call. >>Moreover, they expect me to speak fluent English over the phone. I know I am not good at English writing enough, and I don’t have enough confidence about calling to foreigner on the phone. >> I know I am not good at written English yet and I don’t have enough confidence to call foreigners on the phone. So it gives me a full of stress. But I have to do that since company gives me salary every month for a work including these situations. And even if I am having hard time now, I may be improved with this and it will not bother me anymore. >> So it actually stresses me out. But I have to do it since the company gives me a monthly salary that covers these situations. Even if I am having a hard time now, I am improving on this and I won’t be bothered anymore.