106. Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Thank you for this Jason^^
I have personally experienced a lot of betrayal in the past since I once believed that having a lot of friends was good.
As I got older, I learned that quality is eternally better than quantity~
ESSAY: Is it easy for you to trust a stranger? Why or why not?
>>CORRECT!
I, most of the times, don’t believe a stranger.
>>I, most of the time, don’t believe a stranger.
That’s because, even if, we can be betrayed to the close people, how come we can believe a person who is a stranger.?
>>That’s because, even if, we can be betrayed by the people close to us, how come we can believe a person who is a stranger?
Moreover, while I read the webtoon called Denma, I saw the sentence ‘the word credible is not suitable word in front of a human’.
>> Moreover, while I read a webtoon called Denma, I saw the sentence, \"The word credible is not suitable word in front of a human. \"
And I was thinking about the sentence a lot, I realized, most of the times, it is true!!!
>>And I was thinking about the sentence a lot, I realized, most of the time, it is true!!!
Although they are close friends for a long time, couple, family or something else, many people betray their partner due to plenty of different reasons such as money, girl or boy friend, just for fun, or something else.
>>Although they are close friends for a long time, couples, families or someone else, many people betray their partner due to plenty of different reasons such as money, girl or boy friend, just for fun, or something else.
And most human can be changed with the situations which they engaged in.
>> And most humans can be changed with the situations which they engaged in.
I think it is a kind of natural properties of human.
>>CORRECT!
>>I think it is a human\'s natural property.
So, I am always careful when I need to make a contract or promise with others since I don\'t want to take some bad and disappointed feeling by them.
>>Therefore, I am always careful when I need to make a contract or promise with others since I don\'t want to take some bad and disappointed feeling by them.
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