108. Homework

Thank you very much Jason^^

I have witnessed parents sending their children to school at the early age of 1.

I definitely believe that toddler years are crucial to children socially and emotionally.

I insist that purely educational things can impede their holistic growth. See you!

ESSAY: Some people think that children\'s free time must include educational activities otherwise they will waste their time. What is your opinion?
>>CORRECT!
I don’t think that children’s free time must include educational activities and I don’t understand the people who are thinking about it like that.

>>I don’t think that children’s free time must include educational activities, and I don’t understand the people who are thinking like that.

 When I heard the word free time, it must not be touched and controlled by others since the word free is located in front of the word time.
>>CORRECT! (Whew, I love your logic^^)
Moreover, there are the definitions of the free that I searched the internet as below.

>>Moreover, there are the definitions of the word \"free\" that I searched on the internet as below.
 First, free is the condition which can do everything whatever they want.

>>First, free is the condition which one can do everything they want.

And it is perfectly separated from other situations.

>>CORRECT!
 Second, free is the action which is recognized and used the natural and objective inevitability things.
>> Second, free is the action which is recognizes and uses the natural and objective inevitable things.
Hence, if someone includes something about educational activities during their free time, it is not the free anymore.

>>Hence, if someone includes something about educational activities during their free time, it is not free anymore.

 I think most children like to play game, exercise, communicate each other in the café, or something which is related with their behavior or habit.
>> I think most children like to play games, exercise, communicate with each other in the cafeteria, or something which is related with their behavior or habit.
Thus, they should not touch children’s time while they enjoy their free time.

>>CORRECT!

In my opinion, having a free time also very important to them since they are able to find their characteristic such as what they want or like, furthermore, what they want to be.

>> In my opinion, having a free time also very important to them since they are able to find their characteristic such as what they want or like, what they want to be.