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I have been going to paragliding.
It just five minutes flying was very interest.
Paragliding was steered to expert.
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Hi there!
I think that is the most exciting thing that you have done.
Thanks for sharing it.
I hope I can also try it.^^,
Anyway, please check the corrections I\'ve written.
Have an enjoyable weekend!
~T. Jessie~
I have been going to paragliding.>> I have been paragliding.
It just five minutes flying was very interest.
>> It\'s just five minutes flying but it was very interesting.
Paragliding was steered to expert.
>> Do you mean: When you paraglide, you have to be an expert in steering.
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