11/01 homework-2
학생이 쓴 원문
Forcing my way through :
When I see products on sale in market, I always force myself way through other people.
There are limited quantities for cheap price, I have to spread my arm to catch them./
Otherwise :
We have to save money to prepare our future. Otherwise we can’t enjoy the rest of our days.
We must be quitting our job around in 60s, on the contrary our expected life is expanded.
if we save some money for future, we can leisurely spend our twilights in our life./
Covet:
I sometimes covet material things too much. So I easily forget the true important things.
강사 첨삭
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Verna
Forcing my way through :
>> Correct
When I see products on sale in market, I always force myself way through other people.
When I see products on sale in market, I always force myself way through other people.
>>When I see products on sale in the market, I always force my way through other people.
There are limited quantities for cheap price, I have to spread my arm to catch them./
>>There are limited quantities for cheaper prices, I have to spread my arms to catch them.
Otherwise :
There are limited quantities for cheap price, I have to spread my arm to catch them./
>>There are limited quantities for cheaper prices, I have to spread my arms to catch them.
Otherwise :
>>Correct
We have to save money to prepare our future.
We have to save money to prepare our future.
>>We have to save money to prepare for our future.
Otherwise, we can’t enjoy the rest of our days.
>>Correct
We must be quitting our job around in 60s, on the contrary our expected life is expanded.
We must be quitting our job around in 60s, on the contrary our expected life is expanded.
>>We must quit our job around 60s, on the contrary of our life expectation should be expanded.
if we save some money for future, we can leisurely spend our twilights in our life./
>>If we save some money for our future, we can leisurely spend twilights of our lives./
Covet:
>>If we save some money for our future, we can leisurely spend twilights of our lives./
Covet:
>>Correct
I sometimes covet material things too much.
I sometimes covet material things too much.
>>Correct
So I easily forget the true important things.
>> So I easily forget about truly important things.
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