11/01 homework
학생이 쓴 원문
HI~VERNA~♡
I’m always waiting for talking with you.
I have learned English by cell-phone many times, I easily stopped to learn it.
But not now. As time goes by, I’m interested in speaking and writing in English more and more.
Thank you for your help to make me have interest for English.
1. What is one thing you covet the most? Explain with your reasoning.
The most thing I covet is actually bag. Most Korean women like to get a expensive bag.
Even though they don’t have enough ability to get it, they usually save their pocket money to buy it.
Buying it is way to show off themselves to other people. So I sometimes covet expensive bag, even though I wear cheap clothes.
강사 첨삭
Hello there [이름],
I'm happy to hear from you that you are enjoying learning English with me.
I'm glad that you are now motivated to study well. I'm sure that because of your attitude you will develop your English skills in no time. Be still! See you in class!
Love,
Verna
HI~VERNA~♡>>Correct
I’m always waiting for talking with you.
I’m always waiting for talking with you.
>> I always look forward to talking to you.
I have learned English by cell-phone many times, I easily stopped to learn it.
I have learned English by cell-phone many times, I easily stopped to learn it.
>>I have learned English trough cell-phone many times, but I easily stopped to learn it.
But not now. As time goes by, I’m interested in speaking and writing in English more and more.
But not now. As time goes by, I’m interested in speaking and writing in English more and more.
>>But not now, as time goes by, I’m more interested in speaking and writing in English.
Thank you for your help to make me have interest for English.
>> Thank you for helping me to be more interested in English.
1. What is one thing you covet the most? Explain with your reasoning.
>> Correct
The most thing I covet is actually bag.
Thank you for your help to make me have interest for English.
>> Thank you for helping me to be more interested in English.
1. What is one thing you covet the most? Explain with your reasoning.
>> Correct
The most thing I covet is actually bag.
>>The thing that I covet the most is actually a bag.
Most Korean women like to get a expensive bag.
>>Most Korean women like to get an expensive bag.
Even though they don’t have enough ability to get it, they usually save their pocket money to buy it.
Even though they don’t have enough ability to get it, they usually save their pocket money to buy it.
>>Even though they don’t have enough means to get it, they usually save their pocket money to buy it.
Buying it is way to show off themselves to other people.
Buying it is way to show off themselves to other people.
>>Buying is a way to show off to other people.
So I sometimes covet expensive bag, even though I wear cheap clothes.
>>So I sometimes covet expensive bag even though I wear cheap clothes.
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