11-02

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Jean

>> How wide is the gender gap in your country?

Bringing up the conclusion first, I can\'t measure it.

>> or: I believe it\'s a challenge to measure the gender in my country.

 There are no neutral statistics about showing the gender gap correctly in South Korea.

>> There are no neutral groups that can show accurate statistics when it comes to gender gap in South Korea.

 However I can say that there are still some gender roles keeping alive in our country.

>> However, I can say that there are  still some roles in Korea that are very much gender-specific.

 Going to the previous generations, those tendencies grow strong.

>> Although I must say that this was stronger in the previous generations.

 But fortunately situations are going right way. 

>> Fortunately, the situation is getting better and we are heading in the right direction.

 Growing children have noticed that thoes are bad customs.

>> The young generation of today has noticed this bad practice.

 All we have to do is making great circumstances that next generations can enjoy the gender equality which is we can\'t have.

>> The only thing we can do is to make sure that the next generation can enjoy the gender equality which we can\'t have today.