11/03 homework-2

On the contrary, when we tell everything in my problems to my friends, they can easily get a sympathy and give a practical advised to me. Because we are a similar age and have similar background, we can become good adviser each other. 3.I think that it isn’t good idea to borrow money from a friend. Because our friendship can be broken up if we can’t pay off it. To remain relationship with someone who borrow your money, you should think that you gave money without pay back. And you should borrow money from banks not your friends to meet them forever.

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On the contrary, when we tell everything in my problems to my friends, they can easily get a sympathy and give a practical advised to me.

>> When I tell my friends all the details of my problem, they offer sympathy and they give me practical advice.
Because we are a similar age and have similar background, we can become good adviser each other.

>> We become good advisers for each other because we are of the same ages and we have similar backgrounds.
3 I think that it isn’t good idea to borrow money from a friend.
Because our friendship can be broken up if we can’t pay off it.

>> I think that it isn’t a good idea to borrow money from a friend because the friendship can be broken if the money can’t be paid/returned.
To remain relationship with someone who borrow your money, you should think that you gave money without pay back.

>> To maintain the relationship with someone who borrowed your money, just think that you gave the money and will not expect for a payment.

And you should borrow money from banks not your friends to meet them forever.

>> You should borrow money from the bank and not from your friends to be able to keep the friendship forever.