11/03 homework

1.I think it is impossible to have a best friend of the opposite sex. Because we usually meet our friends when we have some problems to listen their opinions. And we sometimes meet them when we have a spare time. What I want to say is that we have to our time and effort to our friends to maintain our friendship. But if we often to meet a friend of the opposite sex, it is a kind of evidence to be interested in their friend. I mean that our feeling can move from friendship to love, as we are spending more time each other. It will be disappeared friendship. 2.First, what my best friend has influenced in my life in a positive way is that we can get a sympathy with them.When I have trouble something in our school or work, we can’t easily tell these things to our parents.

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I think it is impossible to have a best friend of the opposite sex.

>> Correct
Because we usually meet our friends when we have some problems to listen their opinions.

>> It’s because we usually meet our friends when we have some problems to listen to their opinions.

And we sometimes meet them when we have a spare time.

>>Correct

What I want to say is that we have to our time and effort to our friends to maintain our friendship.

>>What I want to say is that we have to reserve our time and effort for our friends to maintain our friendship.

But if we often to meet a friend of the opposite sex, it is a kind of evidence to be interested in their friend.

>> If we often meet a friend of the opposite sex, it can mean that we are interested in that friend.

I mean that our feeling can move from friendship to love, as we are spending more time each other.

>>I mean that our feelings can change from friendship to love, as we are spending more time with each other.

It will be disappeared friendship.

>>It will make the friendship disappear.

First, what my best friend has influenced in my life in a positive way is that we can get a sympathy with them.

>>First, my best friend has influenced my life in a positive way because of (her/his) sympathy.

When I have trouble something in our school or work, we can’t easily tell these things to our parents.

>> When we have some trouble with things at school or at work, we can’t easily tell these things to our parents.