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2018-11-06 · 첨삭 강사 Jean

학생이 쓴 원문

>> What can you do to stay safe during and after those natural disasters? There are corresponding manuals for each disasters. Thoese were built for ensuring that save a human life. So my answer is, I\'ll follow those introductions which can assure my life safe. However when I fail to or can\'t heed the guides then I\'ll change my religion and pray to the god. Or I\'ll put my hands up in the sky and run in a circle with screaming like a baby. Maybe I\'ll do both.

강사 첨삭

Hello!^^

Thank you for sending your homework.

Cheers!
Jean

>> What can you do to stay safe during and after those natural disasters?

There are corresponding manuals for each disasters.
>> There are corresponding manuals for each disaster.

Thoese were built for ensuring that save a human life.
>> Those were built to ensure people\'s safety.

So my answer is, I\'ll follow those introductions which can assure my life safe.
>> So my answer is, I\'ll follow the instructions on those manuals to assure myself that I would be safe.
>> or: Based on this premise,I\'ll follow those instructions which can ensure my safety.

However when I fail to or can\'t heed the guides then I\'ll change my religion and pray to the god. Or I\'ll put my hands up in the sky and run in a circle with screaming like a baby.
>> However, when I fail to or can\'t heed the guides, I\'ll change my religion and pray to God or the gods or I\'ll put my hands up in the air and run around while screaming like a baby.

Maybe I\'ll do both.
>> correct

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