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2018-11-07 · 첨삭 강사 Jean

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>> Are you willing to donate money to help victims of a natural disaster in other countries? How much would you be willing to doneate? I don\'t donate money to help victims of a nature disaster in other countries directly for now but I\'ve been joinning the small regular sponsorship in MSF. They have been dispatched to contries where the natural disasters have occurred. However I think, it\'s hard to say proudly that I\'m a donator. This is because, the donation amount is way too small and the worst part is that I forgot that I\'ve been contributing money since you gave me this question.

강사 첨삭

Hello!^^

Thank you for sending your homework.

Cheers!
Jean

Are you willing to donate money to help victims of a natural disaster in other countries? How much would you be willing to doneate?

I don\'t donate money to help victims of a nature disaster in other countries directly for now but I\'ve been joinning the small regular sponsorship in MSF.

>> I don\'t donate money to help victims of a natural disaster in other countries directly for now but I\'ve joined the small regular sponsorship in MSF.

They have been dispatched to contries where the natural disasters have occurred.

>> They have been dispatched to countries where the natural disasters have occurred.

However I think, it\'s hard to say proudly that I\'m a donator. This is because, the donation amount is way too small and the worst part is that I forgot that I\'ve been contributing money since you gave me this question.

>> However, I think it\'s hard to say proudly that I\'m a donor or that I donate money to help the victims because the amount I\'ve been donating is way too small and the worst part is that I even forgot that I\'ve been contributing money and just remembered when you asked me this question.

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