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2018-11-09 · 첨삭 강사 Jean

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>>Should adopted children have the right to know their biological parents? I think it fully depends on their intention. Knowing their biological parents or not each has its own merits and demerits. It can be giving a devastating effect on one's life. No one has the right that forces them to realize their biological parents even their adoptive parents count too. Anyone should leave them alone until they want to. This is because, it is not you who is shocked by confirming the tragic facts.

강사 첨삭

Hello!^^

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Jean

   Should adopted children have the right to know their biological parents?

I think it fully depends on their intention.
>> or: I think it fully depends on the biological parents\' intention.

Knowing their biological parents or not each has its own merits and demerits.
>> correct

It can be giving a devastating effect on one\'s life.
>> It can have a devastating effect on one\'s life.

No one has the right that forces them to realize their biological parents even their adoptive parents count too.
>> No one has the right to force these children to know their biological parents and that applies to their adoptive parents too.

Anyone should leave them alone until they want to.  This is because, it is not you who is shocked by confirming the tragic facts.
>> Everyone should just let the said children make their own decision because at the end of the day, they are the ones who have to live with the consequences of knowing or not knowing their biological parents.

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