11/08 homework
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I have a member of a lot of social networking sites.
So whenever I log in the sites, I confuse ID and password.
Even though I usually add the site on my favorites list, it is hard to find the site that I joined before.
And my IDs on sites are different from every sites, so I can’t memorize all IDs.
To use easily, I save my id on excel file and my diary whenever I join new sites.
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When I look into the night sky I usually see constellation.
Because I don’t exactly the location of zodiac sign in the sky, I can only make a division star and moon. (The Big Differ is only thing that I can find.)
And nowadays the night sky isn’t clear rather than before, we can find many stars when we trip the place where have good air.
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름],
I think you had a great weekend because you were very busy. I also joined a lot of social networking sites but I like Facebook the most. In order for me not to forget my ID's and passwords, I write them down. Anyway, thanks for writing your composition. See you tomorrow!
Love,
Verna
I have a member of a lot of social networking sites.
>> I am a member of a lot of social networking sites.So whenever I log in the sites, I confuse ID and password.
So whenever I log on the sites, I'm confused of the ID's and passwords to use.Even though I usually add the site on my favorites list, it is hard to find the site that I joined before.
>> CorrectAnd my IDs on sites are different from every sites, so I can’t memorize all IDs.
>>And ny ID on every sites are different so I can't memorize them all.To use easily, I save my id on excel file and my diary whenever I join new sites.
>>To have a better access, I try to save my ID's on excel files and my diary whenever I join new sites.---------------------------------------------------------When I look into the night sky I usually see constellation.
>> CorrectBecause I don’t exactly the location of zodiac sign in the sky, I can only make a division star and moon. (The Big Differ is only thing that I can find.)
>>Because I don't exactly know the location of zodiac sign in the sky, I can only make a division star and moon. (The Big Dipper is the only thing I can find.)And nowadays the night sky isn’t clear rather than before, we can find many stars when we trip the place where have good air.
>>And nowadays the night sky isn't as clear as before, we can find many stars when we go to a trip in places where we have good air.
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