11-09
학생이 쓴 원문
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If a group of people just came to your country from overseas, what advice would you give them?
What I want to say the most is if you consider living this country, please don\'t take that bad shot.
>> What I would want to say the most is, if you\'re considering living here, please don\'t take any potshots at the people or my county.
Most foreigners who visit Korea have a fantasy that Koreans is nice, calm and helping people.
>> Most foreigners who visit Korea have a misconception that Koreans are nice, calm, and helpful.
In fact, thoes are only particially true.
>> The fact is, those are only partially true.
Those atitudes start with the curiousity. When the curiousity turns the familiar then favors will be gone and you will encounter various bad practices which is you never understand.
>> Those character traits of Koreans stem from curiosity however, once their curiosity turns to familiarity, some people would show their real characters and the foreigners would start to notice practices or customs that they don\'t understand.
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