11/09 Homework

2015-11-11 · 첨삭 강사 Erine

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Are adoptions common in your country? Should you tell the child that he or she was adopted? If so at what age? Or when? The adoptions are not common in Korea. The old people have been reflected by Confucianism so they believe their own blood is important. But the number of parants who adopt the children is getting bigger eventhough they can bear a baby. I think I have to let the child who was adopted know that he or she was adopted when they are an elementary student. But I have to let them know that you are loved as same with biological child.

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Hello, [이름]! I missed reading your compositions. I hope you continuously do this one. Thank you for sharing your thoughts about adoptions. See you soon!^^~~Teacher Erine~~ Are adoptions common in your country? Should you tell the child that he or she was adopted? If so at what age? Or when?The adoptions are not common in Korea. >> Adoptions are not common in Korea. The old people have been reflected by Confucianism so they believe their own blood is important. >> Old people have been reflected/influenced by Conducianism so they believe their own blood is important.But the number of parants who adopt the children is getting bigger eventhough they can bear a baby.>> But the number of parents who adopt the children is getting higher even though they can bear a baby. I think I have to let the child who was adopted know that he or she was adopted when they are an elementary student. >> Correct But I have to let them know that you are loved as same with biological child. >>But I have to let them know that they are loved as the biological child.

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