11.1 homework

2014-11-03 · 첨삭 강사 Chloe

학생이 쓴 원문

Hi Kelly! Good evening! I submit my homework so late. I am sorry. I was a little busy for preparing my business trip. Is it important to love or be loved? Both are important but If I have to choose one,I think that to love is more imporant. If you give love to someone,you can get more love than you give to. Thank you!

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름] !

Thank you for doing your homework.^^

\" A bowl of vegetables with someone you love is better than steak with someone you hate. \"

Proverbs 15:17

Hi Kelly! Good evening!

I submit my homework so late. I am sorry.

>> I\'m sorry for submitting my homework so late.

I was a little busy for preparing my business trip.
>> I was a little busy preparing for my business trip.

Is it important to love or be loved?

Both are important but If I have to choose one,I think that to love is more imporant.

>> Both are important but If I have to choose one, I think to love is more important. (SPELLING)

If you give love to someone,you can get more love than you give to.

>> If you give love to someone, you can get more love than you give.

Thank you!

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