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Hi [이름]! Thank you for taking the time in doing your homework. You\'re very well appreciated. ^ ^
You are not yet a parent, but I guess you will make a very good one someday! ^ ^
You gave a very good realization basing on your personal account. Giving kids certain tasks and responsibility is a good thing. Chores help kids learn responsibility and self-reliance. Assigning children regular chores helps teach them responsibility. Tasks that personally affect kids, such as cleaning their room or doing their own laundry, can help them become more self-reliant at the same time. ^ ^
-Teacher Jedah
>>I think sharing chores is very useful and necessary to all family members, even to children.
I realized from me abut this.
>>I realized this about me.
Before I got married, I never have did chores or cleaning in my home.
>>Before I got married, I never did any chores like cleaning in my home.
It was my mom\'s task...
>>Correct
But, after I got married, I regret so much.
>>But after I got married, I regret it so much.
I had many times for chores or cleaning of cloths after work.
>>I had to do a lot of chores like washing the clothes after work.
It was very stressful and took long time than I expected.
>>It\'s very stressful and it takes me a lot of time doing them than I expected.
I was so sorry to my mom.
>>I feel so sorry for my mom.
So, I assured that I will share all chores and home task with my family even my children.
>>So, I will make sure that chores and home tasks must be shared with family members, even with my children.
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