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2018-11-07 · 첨삭 강사 Jedah

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[Many parents give their children certain chores or tasks to do at home. Should children have to do chores or tasks at home? Be sure to explain why you think it is a good idea or a bad idea. Include examples to support your reasons.] I think the sharing chores is very useful and necessary to all family member, even children. I realized from me abut this. Before I got married, I never have did chores or cleaning in my home. It was my mom's task... But, after I got married, I regret so much. I had many times for chores or cleaning of cloths after work. It was very stressful and took long time than I expected. I was so sorry to my mom. So, I assured that I will share all chores and home task with my family even my children.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]! Thank you for taking the time in doing your homework. You\'re very well appreciated. ^ ^
You are not yet a parent, but I guess you will make a very good one someday! ^ ^
You gave a very good realization basing on your personal account. Giving kids certain tasks and responsibility is a good thing.  Chores help kids learn responsibility and self-reliance. Assigning children regular chores helps teach them responsibility. Tasks that personally affect kids, such as cleaning their room or doing their own laundry, can help them become more self-reliant at the same time. ^ ^

-Teacher Jedah


I think the sharing chores is very useful and necessary to all family member, even children.

>>I think sharing chores is very useful and necessary to all family members, even to children.
I realized from me abut this.

>>I realized this about me. 
Before I got married, I never have did chores or cleaning in my home.

>>Before I got married, I never did any chores like cleaning in my home. 
It was my mom\'s task...

>>Correct
But, after I got married, I regret so much.

>>But after I got married, I regret it so much.
I had many times for chores or cleaning of cloths after work.

>>I had to do a lot of chores like washing the clothes after work. 
It was very stressful and took long time than I expected.

>>It\'s very stressful and it takes me a lot of time doing them than I expected.
I was so sorry to my mom.

>>I feel so sorry for my mom. 
So, I assured that I will share all chores and home task with my family even my children.

>>So, I will make sure that chores and home tasks must be shared with family members, even with my children.  

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