11/1 homework
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I think it is absolutely women.
Not everyone, usually men very simply think and emotional highs and lows are relatively weak.
Women have a lot of thoughts and worries and they can do many things at the same time.
In simple terms, women are possible to multiplay and men are impossible to do it.
I heard that men are using 10,000 per day, but the number of words using women in every day is over 25,000.
It\'s very interesting.
It means that women think a lot of things than men.
But I think it is not a standard for good or bed.
And I think women\'s body also more complicated than men.
Having a baby and hormone change are magical.
Sometimes men get complaints about women\'s complicated minds and behaviors.
I think women have diversity.
If everyone has the same characteristics and personality, the human world will be unbalanced.
So, I think the combination of man and woman is perfect.
But, we should know that occasionally there are women like a man and men like a woman.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]! Thank you for this homework. I really appreciate the effort! ^^
Yes, I definitely agree with you. Women are really quite complicated and complex. We would say \"yes\" but that \"yes\" answer would mean differently or would have other meanings which men have difficulty interpreting and understanding because as you may know women do the opposite as what they say. ^^ So men think that most women are unpredictable too. ^ ^
-Teacher Jedah
I think it is absolutely women.
>>CORRECT
Not everyone, usually men very simply think and emotional highs and lows are relatively weak.
Not everyone, usually men very simply think and emotional highs and lows are relatively weak.
>>Not everyone though, but men usually think simply and they have relatively weak highs and lows.
Women have a lot of thoughts and worries and they can do many things at the same time.
Women have a lot of thoughts and worries and they can do many things at the same time.
>>CORRECT
In simple terms, women are possible to multiplay and men are impossible to do it.
In simple terms, women are possible to multiplay and men are impossible to do it.
>>In simple terms, women are good at multi tasking while it\'s quite impossible for men to do so.
I heard that men are using 10,000 per day, but the number of words using women in every day is over 25,000.
I heard that men are using 10,000 per day, but the number of words using women in every day is over 25,000.
>>I heard that men use 10,000 words per day, but for women they use about 25,000 words per day.
It\'s very interesting.
It\'s very interesting.
>>CORRECT
It means that women think a lot of things than men.
It means that women think a lot of things than men.
>>CORRECT
But I think it is not a standard for good or bed.
But I think it is not a standard for good or bed.
>>But I think it\'s not a basis for judging men and women.
And I think women\'s body also more complicated than men.
And I think women\'s body also more complicated than men.
>>And I think that a woman\'s body is also more complicated than a man\'s.
Having a baby and hormone change are magical.
Having a baby and hormone change are magical.
>>Having a baby and experiencing hormonal changes are sort of magical.
Sometimes men get complaints about women\'s complicated minds and behaviors.
Sometimes men get complaints about women\'s complicated minds and behaviors.
>>Sometimes, men would complain about women\'s complicated minds and behaviors.
I think women have diversity.
I think women have diversity.
>>CORRECT
If everyone has the same characteristics and personality, the human world will be unbalanced.
If everyone has the same characteristics and personality, the human world will be unbalanced.
>>CORRECT
So, I think the combination of man and woman is perfect.
So, I think the combination of man and woman is perfect.
>>So, I think the combination of a man and a woman is perfect.
But, we should know that occasionally there are women like a man and men like a woman.
But, we should know that occasionally there are women like a man and men like a woman.
>>But, we have to remember that occasionally there are women who act and think like men and men like women.
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