11.10 Homework

2014-11-10 · 첨삭 강사 Kelly

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Hi Kelly! It's a nice to hear your voice again! Good afternoon! Why do people immigrate to other countries? I think that living another country with a completely different culture can be hard for us. but many people want to live in other countries. I think that the reasons for that are two options. The first one is education of their children.They might make a decision on immigration because they think their kids will be learned more easily in other countries. The other reason is taking a new opportunity, but there are a lot of new difficulties to live in other countries. Thank you!

강사 첨삭

Hello Mr. [이름]! Welcome back to Power English! I enjoyed our class this morning. Thank you so much. Anyway, here\'s my correction to your homework. ~Kelly^^ Hi Kelly! It\'s a nice to hear your voice again! Good afternoon!>> Correct.Why do people immigrate to other countries?I think that living another country with a completely different culture can be hard for us. >> Correct. but many people want to live in other countries. >> Correct.***But I think that the reasons for that are two options. >> I think that there are two options that we can consider when living abroad. The first one is education of their children. >> Correct. They might make a decision on immigration because they think their kids will be learned more easily in other countries. >> They might consider immigrating to another country because they think their kids will learn more easily. The other reason is taking a new opportunity, but there are a lot of new difficulties to live in other countries.>> The other reason is taking a new opportunity, but there are a lot of new difficulties that people encounter when living in other countries.Thank you! >> Correct.

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