11. 10 Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Directions: Answer the question using complete sentences not more than 8.
Question: Do you like to cook? Why or why not?
I don't like to cook. Because I should spend a lot of time and efforts to cook. Cooking also demands artistic sense. It's not easy process. I like easy things which I don't need to pay attention to. But I sometimes cook for my boyfriend for example, Vietnamese Spring Rolls, burrito, cookies. Every food demands more than 2 hours. Everytime I cook, I think "Oh, I want to take a rest." And also everytime I cook, I regret having said "I will cook for you." to my boyfriend. But when I see his smiling face, I feel very rewarded.
강사 첨삭
Hello there, [이름]!!:)
How are you doing today?
Very good in answering your homework.
I saw that you postponed your class today.
You must be so busy!!^_^
I will talk to you on Wednesday.
~ T. Lorna^_^
>> I don\'t like to cook because I should spend a lot of time and efforts to cook.
Cooking also demands artistic sense.
>> Cooking also demands an artistic sense.
It\'s not easy process.
>> It\'s not an easy process.
I like easy things which I don\'t need to pay attention to.
>> I like to do easy work which doesn\'t requires much attention.
But I sometimes cook for my boyfriend for example, Vietnamese Spring Rolls, burrito, cookies.
>> But I sometimes cook some food for my boyfriend like Vietnamese spring rolls, burrito and cookies.
Every food demands more than 2 hours.
>> Every recipe requires two hours to cook it.
Everytime I cook, I think \"Oh, I want to take a rest.\"
>> Every time I cook, I tell myself, \"oh,you need to take a rest!\"
And also everytime I cook, I regret having said \"I will cook for you.\" to my boyfriend.
>> Every time I cook, I regret telling my boyfriend that I will cook for him.
But when I see his smiling face, I feel very rewarded.
>> Correct! (^-^)
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