11/11 homework-2
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Hi there,
Oh I completely agree with you. In my opinion, we shouldn't buy a house
which is way beyond our budget. The interest and the principal will take every cent from our pocket.
Here are the corrections, I hope it will help.
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Who looks after the household budget in your house?
My mom manages our household budget in my home.
>> Correct
So we have to save all things such as electronic and water to avoid scold.
>> So we have to save energy like the use of electronic devices and water so our Mom won't scold us.
Would you buy a house even though it’s way beyond your budget?
I wouldn’t buy a house if the price of new house is over my budget.
>> Correct
>> I wouldn't buy a house if the price is over my budget. >>better
Because I have to pay a lot of interest on a loan and the principal at the same time for several years.
>> Correct
For that period, I can’t do anything such as travel and leisure sports to save money.
>> For that period, I can't do anything for myself such as travelling, leisure sports and I can't save money as well.
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