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Hello,
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Keep up the great job.
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Do you usually work with a budget? For what kind of things?
>> Do you usually work within a budget? If so, for what things?
When I buy something, I usually keep track of my budget.
>> Correct
I have to pay some amount to my installment savings, so I always record my list to buy something on excel file.
>> I have to pay some amount from my savings in an installment basis, so I always record the list of what I'm going to buy in an excel file.
If I don’t that, I can’t save money due to my shopping habit.
>> If I don't do that, I can't save money due to my shopping habit.
Would you relocate to another country if you had the chance?
>> correct
If I have a change to go another country, I would like to the country to use English as a native language.
>> If I have a chance to go to another country, I would choose a country which uses English as their native language.
If so, I can save my time to learn English.
>> Correct
And It seems that I can do another instead of learning that during that time
>> I can do other things at that time instead of learning.
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