11.11 Homework

2013-11-11 · 첨삭 강사 Kelly

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Hi there! Today is double elevenady. Did you get some gifts from your boyfriend ? I hope you have a nice day. Homework Does everyone have equal job opportunities in your country? No,I don't think so. Generally,men were favored over women here in korea. We need a rethink of this problem. I think childbirth is great basic of our prosperity and it must be respected. So gender equality is very important policy. Thank you!

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Hello there^^ I hope your doing great right now and I hope you enjoyed your weekend... Take a lot of care and Good day to you!!! T.Kelly Hi there! >>CORRECT!! Today is double elevenady. >>YOU MEAN TO SAY: Today is the 11th day. Did you get some gifts from your boyfriend ? >>Have you received a gift from your boyfriend? I hope you have a nice day.>>CORRECT!!Homework >>CORRECT!!Does everyone have equal job opportunities in your country?>>Does anyone in your country has an equal job opportunity?No,I don\'t think so.>>CORRECT!! Generally,men were favored over women here in korea. >>CORRECT!! We need a rethink of this problem. >>We need to think seriously about this matter. I think childbirth is great basic of our prosperity and it must be respected. >>I think childbirth is a great basic in our prosperity and it must be respected. So gender equality is very important policy.>>So, gender equality is a very important policy.Thank you! >>CORRECT!!

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