11.11 Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Hi there! Today is double elevenady. Did you get some gifts from your boyfriend ? I hope you have a nice day.
Homework
Does everyone have equal job opportunities in your country?
No,I don't think so.
Generally,men were favored over women here in korea. We need a rethink of this problem. I think childbirth is great basic of our prosperity and it must be respected. So gender equality is very important policy.
Thank you!
강사 첨삭
Hello there^^
I hope your doing great right now and I hope you enjoyed your weekend...
Take a lot of care and Good day to you!!!
T.Kelly
Hi there!
>>CORRECT!!
Today is double elevenady.
>>YOU MEAN TO SAY: Today is the 11th day.
Did you get some gifts from your boyfriend ?
>>Have you received a gift from your boyfriend?
I hope you have a nice day.>>CORRECT!!Homework
>>CORRECT!!Does everyone have equal job opportunities in your country?>>Does anyone in your country has an equal job opportunity?No,I don\'t think so.>>CORRECT!!
Generally,men were favored over women here in korea.
>>CORRECT!!
We need a rethink of this problem.
>>We need to think seriously about this matter.
I think childbirth is great basic of our prosperity and it must be respected.
>>I think childbirth is a great basic in our prosperity and it must be respected.
So gender equality is very important policy.>>So, gender equality is a very important policy.Thank you!
>>CORRECT!!
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