11.11 Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Hi ma'am! Good morning! Have you heard the Pepero Day? Today is the Pepero day,11th November.We enjoy this day giving some snacks named Pepero to her boyfriend.I also got Pepero snacks this morning from our woman employee.I feel happy.
What kind of climate do you prefer when choosing a place to go on vacation?
When choosing a place to go on vacation,I prefer glorious spring weather,because we can enjoy the scenery and many flowers in addition.I don't like rainy weather because it makes me feel irritated and bored. There are four seasons in Korea, so it is good for traveling in our country. I love Korea.
Thank you! Have a wonderful day Kelly!
강사 첨삭
Happy Tuesday, Mr. [이름]!
Happy Peppero Day to you! I hope that you will be happy not only today but everyday. Take care!
~Kelly^^
Hi ma\'am! Good morning!
>> Correct.
Have you heard the Pepero Day?
>> Have you heard about the Peppero Day?
Today is the Pepero day,11th November.
>> Today is November 11th, Peppero Day!
We enjoy this day giving some snacks named Pepero to her boyfriend.
>> We enjoy this day giving some snacks called Pepero to our boyfriends.
I also got Pepero snacks this morning from our woman employee.
>> I also got Pepero snacks this morning from our women employees.
I feel happy.
>> Correct.What kind of climate do you prefer when choosing a place to go on vacation?When choosing a place to go on vacation, I prefer glorious spring weather, because we can enjoy the scenery and many flowers in addition.
>> When choosing a place to go on vacation, I prefer theglorious spring weather, because we can enjoy a beautiful scenery and many flowers.
I don\'t like rainy weather because it makes me feel irritated and bored.
>> Correct.
There are four seasons in Korea, so it is good for traveling in our country.
>>There are four seasons in Korea, so it is good to travel in our country.
I love Korea.
>> Correct.Thank you!
>> Correct.
Have a wonderful day Kelly!
>> Correct.
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