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학생이 쓴 원문
Good morning~
I'm on my way for education. I did not talk about this education, did I ? But I can answer your call. That's why I didn't give u notice. ^^ I am appreciated about your comment about my worry regarding English and the methods to improving the skill.
As I said yesterday, I am thinking it is my own problem and the result of time which was invested for studying English by myself.
Actually, I did not read any book and meomorize any words these days. I think this season is my slump.
So I could not cincentrate on studying and reading.
I seem to run to catch two rabbits.And I am not sure I can catch either one.
Anyway, I want to have great class today and I try to prepare oour class with the text book.
Today I want to talk about shopping on our text book.
I almost arrived at last station of the subway for going the school of the security course and I will trnsfer to a bus.
It is a first day of the course so they gave a notice to join until 09:30. Nevertheless, I could not have any free time because my house is far from the school.
I wll disembark at next station. See u~^^
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]!
We all get into slump sometimes in our lives but what I like about you is that you are aware of it and you are willing to get out a slump and just move on with your life. Most of a journey to pick yourself up and out of a slump is going to be a very personal and internally guided one (provided that you trust your own voice). In your case, I think that you\'ve decided to follow another path which leads to your new goal (that is joining an institution/school). Good luck with that and know that I\'m always here to support and help you in whatever ventures you choose to take. ^^
I\'ll definitely talk to you soon.~
Teacher Reina *.*
Good morning~
I\'m on my way for education.
>>> I\'m on my way to the school/institution to study/train. (it depends on what you are going to do there [이름].^^)
I did not talk about this education, did I ? But I can answer your call.
>>> correct!^^
That\'s why I didn\'t give u notice. ^^
>>> That\'s why I didn\'t give you a notice. ^^ kkk
I am appreciated about your comment about my worry regarding English and the methods to improving the skill.
>>> I appreciate your comment regarding my worries about my English and your advise on how to improve my skill.
As I said yesterday, I am thinking it is my own problem and the result of time which was invested for studying English by myself.
>>> Like I said yesterday, I am thinking that it is my own problem and the amount of time that I invest in studying English is not enough.
Actually, I did not read any book and memorize any words these days.
>>> correct!^^
I think this season is my slump.
>>> I think that this season, I\'m into a slump.
So I could not concentrate on studying and reading.
>>> correct!^^
I seem to run to catch two rabbits.And I am not sure I can catch either one.
>>> I seem to run to catch two rabbits but I;m not sure If I can catch one.
Anyway, I want to have great class today and I try to prepare our class with the text book.
>>> Anyway, I want to have a great class today and I will try to prepare for our class with the textbook.
Today I want to talk about shopping on our text book.
>>> Today, I want to talk about shopping in our text book.
I almost arrived at last station of the subway for going the school of the security course and I will trnsfer to a bus.
>>> I\'m almost in the last station of the subway to go to the school of the security course and I have to transfer to a bus.
It is a first day of the course so they gave a notice to join until 09:30.
>>> It is the first day of the course so they gave a notice that we can join until 9:30.
Nevertheless, I could not have any free time because my house is far from the school.
>>> correct!^^
I wll disembark at next station.
>>> I will disembark a the next station.
See u~^^
>>> correct!^^
>>>
We all get into slump sometimes in our lives but what I like about you is that you are aware of it and you are willing to get out a slump and just move on with your life. Most of a journey to pick yourself up and out of a slump is going to be a very personal and internally guided one (provided that you trust your own voice). In your case, I think that you\'ve decided to follow another path which leads to your new goal (that is joining an institution/school). Good luck with that and know that I\'m always here to support and help you in whatever ventures you choose to take. ^^
I\'ll definitely talk to you soon.~
Teacher Reina *.*
Good morning~
I\'m on my way for education.
>>> I\'m on my way to the school/institution to study/train. (it depends on what you are going to do there [이름].^^)
I did not talk about this education, did I ? But I can answer your call.
>>> correct!^^
That\'s why I didn\'t give u notice. ^^
>>> That\'s why I didn\'t give you a notice. ^^ kkk
I am appreciated about your comment about my worry regarding English and the methods to improving the skill.
>>> I appreciate your comment regarding my worries about my English and your advise on how to improve my skill.
As I said yesterday, I am thinking it is my own problem and the result of time which was invested for studying English by myself.
>>> Like I said yesterday, I am thinking that it is my own problem and the amount of time that I invest in studying English is not enough.
Actually, I did not read any book and memorize any words these days.
>>> correct!^^
I think this season is my slump.
>>> I think that this season, I\'m into a slump.
So I could not concentrate on studying and reading.
>>> correct!^^
I seem to run to catch two rabbits.And I am not sure I can catch either one.
>>> I seem to run to catch two rabbits but I;m not sure If I can catch one.
Anyway, I want to have great class today and I try to prepare our class with the text book.
>>> Anyway, I want to have a great class today and I will try to prepare for our class with the textbook.
Today I want to talk about shopping on our text book.
>>> Today, I want to talk about shopping in our text book.
I almost arrived at last station of the subway for going the school of the security course and I will trnsfer to a bus.
>>> I\'m almost in the last station of the subway to go to the school of the security course and I have to transfer to a bus.
It is a first day of the course so they gave a notice to join until 09:30.
>>> It is the first day of the course so they gave a notice that we can join until 9:30.
Nevertheless, I could not have any free time because my house is far from the school.
>>> correct!^^
I wll disembark at next station.
>>> I will disembark a the next station.
See u~^^
>>> correct!^^
>>>
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