11.12 Homework

2013-11-12 · 첨삭 강사 Kelly

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Hi there! We were disconnected during in our class this morning. My phone's battery was dead.So,I couldn't receive your call any more. I am so sorry and feel something lacking. Homework What can you do to increase your intelligence? Reading a mistery novel,Further boosting will(desire),improve concentration and using too much of thinking... I think,these help me to be improved intelligence. Thank you!

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Hi there! Thank you for the information Mr. [이름]. I am really worried about our class this morning. Anyway, I will call you again tomorrow. Have a good day! ~t. KELLY~ Hi there! >> Correct!We were disconnected during in our class this morning. >> We were disconnected during our class this morning. My phone\'s battery was dead. >> My phone\'s battery was empty. So,I couldn\'t receive your call any more. >> Correct! I am so sorry and feel something lacking.>> I am so sorry and I feel that something is lacking.HomeworkWhat can you do to increase your intelligence?Reading a mistery novel, Further boosting will(desire),improve concentration and using too much of thinking... >> Reading a mystery novel further boosts my will and desire to enhance my intelligence. Also, stimulating my brain helps me improve my intelligence. I think, these help me to be improved intelligence. >> I think, these help me to improve my intelligence. Thank you! >> Correct! 

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