11.12 Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Hi there!
We were disconnected during in our class this morning. My phone's battery was dead.So,I couldn't receive your call any more. I am so sorry and feel something lacking.
Homework
What can you do to increase your intelligence?
Reading a mistery novel,Further boosting will(desire),improve concentration and using too much of thinking... I think,these help me to be improved intelligence.
Thank you!
강사 첨삭
Hi there! Thank you for the information Mr. [이름]. I am really worried about our class this morning. Anyway, I will call you again tomorrow. Have a good day!
~t. KELLY~
Hi there!
>> Correct!We were disconnected during in our class this morning.
>> We were disconnected during our class this morning.
My phone\'s battery was dead.
>> My phone\'s battery was empty.
So,I couldn\'t receive your call any more.
>> Correct!
I am so sorry and feel something lacking.>> I am so sorry and I feel that something is lacking.HomeworkWhat can you do to increase your intelligence?Reading a mistery novel, Further boosting will(desire),improve concentration and using too much of thinking...
>> Reading a mystery novel further boosts my will and desire to enhance my intelligence. Also, stimulating my brain helps me improve my intelligence.
I think, these help me to be improved intelligence. >> I think, these help me to improve my intelligence. Thank you!
>> Correct!
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