11.12 Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Hi Kelly! Good morning! It's a vibrant middle day of this week.Good luck!
What do clothes tell people about our personalities?
Wearing clothes is controlled by our personalities. Some people like wearing casual attire,but we need to wear full dress sometimes such as in wedding and fureral.The well-dressed affects our first impression.I like wearing suit because I should meet many people for my business everyday. I think smart appearance can be gotten a good feeling with other people.That's very important in our life.
Thank you! Bye!
강사 첨삭
Good morning Mr. [이름]!
Thank you for doing your homework early today. Please be guided by the corrections that I have made. Take care and have a great day!
~Kelly^^
Hi Kelly! Good morning! It\'s a vibrant middle day of this week.Good luck!>> Correct.What do clothes tell people about our personalities?Wearing clothes is controlled by our personalities.
>> Our personalities influence the way we dress up.
Some people like wearing casual attire,but we need to wear full dress sometimes such as in wedding and fureral.
>> Some people like wearing casual attires, but we need to wear full dress sometimes such as in weddings and furerals.
The well-dressed affects our first impression.
>> A well-dressed person gives a good impression.
I like wearing suit because I should meet many people for my business everyday.
>> Correct.I think smart appearance can be gotten a good feeling with other people.
>> I think that we can build a good relationship with other people by our smart appearance.
That\'s very important in our life.>> Correct.Thank you! Bye!
>> Correct.
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