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It must have been a traumatic experience for you, but at least you\'ve learned a lesson. We really have to be very careful especially in unfamiliar places. Good thing, they did not harm you! ^ ^ So, when travelling always be wary and be mindful of oneself and possessions. ^ ^

-Teacher Jedah

>>Correct
I have an important experience to keep my belongings safely.

>>I had a very memorable experience when it comes to keeping my belongings safe and secure.
About five years ago, I went to Italy too attend conference alone.

>>About five years ago, I went to Italy to attend a conference alone. 
After finish the conference, I started my private trip for few city of Italy.

>>After I finished the conference, I started my trip alone to explore some places in Italy. 
My first city was Rome.

>>My first city to visit was Rome.
I arrived at the train station in Rome at the night, It was very difficult to find my hotel.

>>I arrived at the train station in Rome at night, ad it was very difficult for me to find my hotel. 
I already knew the use of a cell phone is very dangerous in the street, because it can be target from thief to steal high quality cell phone.

>>I was aware that using my phone on the street was very dangerous; I could be a potential target for thieves stealing high quality cellphones. 
But, at that time, I don\'t have a difference option, So, I have find the map in my phone.

>>But, at that time, I didn\'t have any other option, so, I tried to find the map on my phone.
Finally, two guys stolen my phone, and I shocked a lot.

>>Finally, two guys came to me and grabbed my phone, I was in total shock!
It was the most terrible experience for me.

>>Correct 
However, after that, I am very careful in abroad.

>>However, after that, I am very careful when I\'m in abroad.
So maybe It\'s not stolen yet after the events. ^^

>>So, I have never been a victim of theft after that event. ^ ^