11/12 homework
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[When was the first time you thought life was great? What happened?]
I met my husband in 2013.
We have been met for one year and prepared the wedding for one year.
When we went to the honeymoon after the wedding ceremony, I suddenly thought things that have happened to us in the past.
It was a long and beautiful story to us.
My mother and father have been met with each other for a very long time ago, and my parents-in-law too.
And, they gave birth to a baby in different cities and a different time, me and my husband.
We had absolutely different life before meeting each other for about 30 years.
We will live together as a family for forwarding about 30 years.
I think it is like magic.
People have a story like this, respectively.
So, when I think about this kind of story, I think life is great.
I absolutely agree with the words of Charlie Chaplin, \'life is a tragedy when seen in close-up, but a comedy in long-shot\'.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]! As always I appreciate you and the effort you put in your homework. ^ ^
Nice thoughts you have here. We meet different people in our lives but there is always the one that is meant for us. Really, what kind of magic is that? I wonder if it is fate or destiny. Do you believe in them? ^ ^
-Teacher Jedah
I met my husband in 2013.
>>CORRECT
We have been met for one year and prepared the wedding for one year.
We have been met for one year and prepared the wedding for one year.
>>We dated for a year and prepared for the wedding a year after. (I hope I got this one right. ^ ^)
When we went to the honeymoon after the wedding ceremony, I suddenly thought things that have happened to us in the past.
When we went to the honeymoon after the wedding ceremony, I suddenly thought things that have happened to us in the past.
>>When we went on a honeymoon after the wedding, I suddenly thought of the things that have happened to us in the past.
It was a long and beautiful story to us.
It was a long and beautiful story to us.
>>CORRECT
My mother and father have been met with each other for a very long time ago, and my parents-in-law too.
My mother and father have been met with each other for a very long time ago, and my parents-in-law too.
>>My mother and father met each other a long time ago, and so did my parents-in-law.
And, they gave birth to a baby in different cities and a different time, me and my husband.
And, they gave birth to a baby in different cities and a different time, me and my husband.
>>And, they gave birth to babies in different cities and in a different time; that would be me and my husband.
We had absolutely different life before meeting each other for about 30 years.
We had absolutely different life before meeting each other for about 30 years.
>>We had absolutely lived different lives for thirty years before we met.
We will live together as a family for forwarding about 30 years.
We will live together as a family for forwarding about 30 years.
>>We will live together as a family for even as long as thirty years. (I hope this is what you mean.)
I think it is like magic.
I think it is like magic.
>>CORRECT
People have a story like this, respectively.
People have a story like this, respectively.
>>People do have the same story as mine.
So, when I think about this kind of story, I think life is great.
>>CORRECT
I absolutely agree with the words of Charlie Chaplin, \'life is a tragedy when seen in close-up, but a comedy in long-shot\'.
I absolutely agree with the words of Charlie Chaplin, \'life is a tragedy when seen in close-up, but a comedy in long-shot\'.
>>CORRECT
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