11/13 homework

2018-11-13 · 첨삭 강사 Jedah

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[Which way do you think is better when a conflict arises: taking some time and distance or solving the problem immediately?] I prefer the way taking some time and distance up to calm down each other. If we keep facing opponent, it can lead to hurt feelings because we will argue continuously. Moreover, we can not have a conversation rationally because the feeling is too intense. When I argue with my husband, this situation is occurred in my home. We want to say more badly for each other, and deeply hurt at that time. It is like chaos. After have some time, when we can think more rationally, we start a conversation again. If so, we can say 'sorry' at first. But, I think the solving the problem immediately is better in the business case. At the business, confidence and responsibility is very important. So, we should conclude about their responsibility range on the meeting immediately.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]! Thank you for doing your homework. Awesome thoughts on this one! I really have to agree with you. There is always a time out when it comes to relationships. We don\'t want to say words we will regret, so better give each other some space and a time to calm down before resolving the issues. But, totally different in a business setting. We just have to be professionals when dealing with the problem. ^ ^

-Teacher Jedah


I prefer the way taking some time and distance up to calm down each other.

>>I prefer taking some time and distancing myself until both parties are calmed down. 
If we keep facing opponent, it can lead to hurt feelings because we will argue continuously.

>>If we would confront the other, it may lead to more argument and may cause a lot of hurt.
Moreover, we can not have a conversation rationally because the feeling is too intense.

>>Correct
When I argue with my husband, this situation is occurred in my home.

>>I usually have an argument with my husband at home.
We want to say more badly for each other, and deeply hurt at that time.

>>We would say a lot of bad things about each other and we end up hurting each other deeply.
It is like chaos.

>>It is chaos. 
After have some time, when we can think more rationally, we start a conversation again.

>>After giving each other some time, we can have a more rational conversation.
If so, we can say \'sorry\' at first.

>>It is hard to ask for an apology at first. 
But, I think the solving the problem immediately is better in the business case.

>>But, in a work place or business setting, I think solving the problem immediately is better.
At the business, confidence and responsibility is very important.

>>In a business, confidence and knowing your responsibilities is important.
So, we should conclude about their responsibility range on the meeting immediately.

>>So, we should identify responsibilities and resolve problems immediately in a meeting.

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