11/13 homework
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Hi [이름]! Thank you for doing your homework. Awesome thoughts on this one! I really have to agree with you. There is always a time out when it comes to relationships. We don\'t want to say words we will regret, so better give each other some space and a time to calm down before resolving the issues. But, totally different in a business setting. We just have to be professionals when dealing with the problem. ^ ^
-Teacher Jedah
I prefer the way taking some time and distance up to calm down each other.
>>I prefer taking some time and distancing myself until both parties are calmed down.
If we keep facing opponent, it can lead to hurt feelings because we will argue continuously.
>>If we would confront the other, it may lead to more argument and may cause a lot of hurt.
Moreover, we can not have a conversation rationally because the feeling is too intense.
>>Correct
When I argue with my husband, this situation is occurred in my home.
>>I usually have an argument with my husband at home.
We want to say more badly for each other, and deeply hurt at that time.
>>We would say a lot of bad things about each other and we end up hurting each other deeply.
It is like chaos.
>>It is chaos.
After have some time, when we can think more rationally, we start a conversation again.
>>After giving each other some time, we can have a more rational conversation.
If so, we can say \'sorry\' at first.
>>It is hard to ask for an apology at first.
But, I think the solving the problem immediately is better in the business case.
>>But, in a work place or business setting, I think solving the problem immediately is better.
At the business, confidence and responsibility is very important.
>>In a business, confidence and knowing your responsibilities is important.
So, we should conclude about their responsibility range on the meeting immediately.
>>So, we should identify responsibilities and resolve problems immediately in a meeting.
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