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2018-11-15 · 첨삭 강사 Jean

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>> How do you think western families and eastern families differ? The critical differ between western families and eastern families is the physical distance. Most Oriental families have preferred to live under the same roof. Such a way of life has created a group-centered thought that is contrary to Western individualism. Extended family life is also the source of strength for older generations to lead a young generation. Such thoughts have made the cultural gap between western and eastern.

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Jean

How do you think western families and eastern families differ?

The critical differ between western families and eastern families is the physical distance.
>> The critical difference between western and eastern families is the geography.

Most Oriental families have preferred to live under the same roof.
>> Most oriental families prefer to live under the same roof.

Such a way of life has created a group-centered thought that is contrary to Western individualism.
>> correct

Extended family life is also the source of strength for older generations to lead a young generation.
>> Having or perhaps living with their extended family is also a source of strength for older generations to lead the young ones.

Such thoughts have made the cultural gap between western and eastern.
>> Such thoughts have created the cultural gap between the west and the east.

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