11.14 Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Hi there!
Good morning,sir?
Homework
What's the best way to stamp out racism?
What's the worst example of racism you've witnessed or experienced?
To stamp out racism,there is need to be given legal status of equal.
It is so difficult to be fulfilled because of human selfishness.
In America,There is still exist "draw the color line". As long as it exist,we all can not be happy.
I hate racism basically.
Thank you!
See you next class!
강사 첨삭
Hello Mr. [이름]! How is your day going? I hope that you are having a great day. Anyway, thank you for doing your homework even if you are at work. Have a great day Sir!
~t. KELLY~
Hi there!
>> Correct.Good morning,sir?
>> Correct
NOTE: SIR: a formal term of address used to a man.
>> OR: Good morning ma\'am. (a formal term of address used to a woman)HomeworkWhat\'s the best way to stamp out racism?What\'s the worst example of racism you\'ve witnessed or experienced?To stamp out racism,there is need to be given legal status of equal.
>> To stamp out racism, there is need for equality.It is so difficult to be fulfilled because of human selfishness.>> It is so difficult to fulfill because of human selfishness.
In America,There is still exist \"draw the color line\".
>> In America, there is discrimination.
As long as it exist,we all can not be happy.
>> As long as it exists, we cannot be happy.I hate racism basically.>> I hate racism.Thank you!
>> CorrectSee you next class!
파워잉글리쉬 영어첨삭교정 서비스에 실제로 접수된 글입니다. 작성자와 글에 등장하는 사람·회사 이름, 연락처 등 개인을 알아볼 수 있는 정보는 모두 지웠습니다. 문법 오류는 학습 자료로서의 가치를 위해 원문 그대로 두었습니다.