11.14 Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Hi there! It's quite chilly today for early winter. What do you have good plans this weekend.I have to go Seoul because our customer's daughter is getting married on Sunday.
I feel so bored because I can't rest even though it's my free time.
Homework
How would you describe the suicide rate in your country?
I've heard about the news that Korea's suicide rate is the highest one in the OPEC countries. According to the report,an average of 40 Koreans commit suicite everyday,and it pretty much happened in rural than urban. That is because it's tough to live in rural,particularly for older people.It's a very sad thing for our country. I am hopping that they can live in their life more happy and comfortable as much as they want.
Thank you! Have a nice weekend!
강사 첨삭
Good afternoon Mr. [이름]!
Keep yourself warm on a chilly weather. Anyway, thank you for the information and statistics that you have provided regarding our homework for today. Please review my corrections. Have a great weekend and enjoy the wedding ceremony that youa re going to attend to. Take care!
~Kelly^^
Hi there! It\'s quite chilly today for early winter.
>> Hi there! It\'s quite chilly in early winter.
What do you have good plans this weekend.
>> Do you have good plans this weekend?
I have to go Seoul because our customer\'s daughter is getting married on Sunday.
>> I have to go to Seoul because our customer\'s daughter is getting married on Sunday.I feel so bored because I can\'t rest even though it\'s my free time.>> Correct.HomeworkHow would you describe the suicide rate in your country?I\'ve heard about the news that Korea\'s suicide rate is the highest one in the OPEC countries.
>> Correct.
According to the report, an average of 40 Koreans commit suicite everyday, and it pretty much happened in rural than urban.
>> According to the report, an average of 40 Koreans commit suicite everyday, and it happens more in rural than urban areas.
That is because it\'s tough to live in rural, particularly for older people.
>> That is because it\'s tough to live in rural areas, particularly for older people.
It\'s a very sad thing for our country.
>> Correct.
I am hopping that they can live in their life more happy and comfortable as much as they want.>> I am hoping that they can live happily and more comfortably as long as they want.Thank you! Have a nice weekend!
>> Correct.
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