11/14 homework

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There has been a lot of debates and case studies on divorce. As a marriage dissolves, some parents find themselves asking a lot of questions and they may worry most about their children. Divorce creates emotional turmoil for the entire family, but for kids, the situation can be quite scary, confusing and frustrating. I hope there is a better way to resolve issues within a family, but if the situation can not be fixed anymore and it\'s giving a lot of stress to all the parties/people involved; then, I guess divorce is an option.^ ^

-Teacher Jedah

>>Nowadays, so many couples are getting a divorce, I know of actual cases around me.
I heard the divorce is biggest emotional event and stress in life.

>>I heard going through a divorce causes too much emotional stress in life.
Even if they want to do that each other, it is able to feel failure.

>>Even if couples try to work out their relationship, there are still some failures. (I hope this is what you mean.)
I got married three years ago, I also can not say the marriage make us always happy.

>>I got married three years ago, I also can not say whether I will have a happy marriage.
However, I think we should try to understand each other.

>>Correct
So I think we must have our own job.

>>So I think we must have our own jobs.
If we concentrate only for our family, it\'s stressful and generates something unsatisfying to husband or wife.

>>If we only concentrate on our family, it\'s going to be stressful and would generate a feeling of dissatisfaction to either husband or wife. 
We work and fight in the society, and we have to take a rest and refresh in home.

>>We work and hassle in the society, and the home is where we rest and refresh ourselves. 
Home is best place to find peace.

>>Home is the best place to find peace.