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[Thomas Carlyle said: “I\'ve got a great ambition to die of exhaustion rather than boredom.” What do you think he means by this? Do you agree?]
I absolutely agree with his saying.
I really don\'t like boredom.
This is one reason to work forever in my life.
When I work and exhaust my energy I feel I live now.
And it means I have a social role in society.
I think the meaning of saying is that do not stop to think and aware and do something continuously to feel happy.
A person who stops to think and live a meaningless life is getting old.
We should think \'what makes me happy? what I want to do?\'.
When I do work what I want to do I can be happy.
If I will stop my work and just stay in my home after retirement, I think I\'m so sad.
So, sometimes I think what I can do after retirement.
Maybe my third life will begin after retirement.
My second life already began from the marriage with my husband.
When I will die, I hope to conclude I lived very well and I don\'t have any regrets.
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Hi [이름]! Thanks for accomplishing and sending your homework early. I really appreciate it! ^^
Well thought of composition [이름]! I like it. And I definitely agree with you. We only live once so why not live it to the fullest. It doesn\'t mean living luxuriously but doing what you really like and appreciating blessings and simple things. ^^ And like you, I\'d rather continue working and doing what I like that living idly and just wait for my time to ran out! ^ ^
-Teacher Jedah
>>I absolutely agree with this saying.
>>I absolutely agree with what he said.
I really don\'t like boredom.
I really don\'t like boredom.
>>CORRECT
This is one reason to work forever in my life.
This is one reason to work forever in my life.
>>This is one reason why I want to work for the rest of my life.
When I work and exhaust my energy I feel I live now.
When I work and exhaust my energy I feel I live now.
>>When I work and exhaust my energy, I feel more alive.
And it means I have a social role in society.
And it means I have a social role in society.
>>CORRECT
I think the meaning of saying is that do not stop to think and aware and do something continuously to feel happy.
I think the meaning of saying is that do not stop to think and aware and do something continuously to feel happy.
>>I think the saying means that we must not stop thinking and must continue doing things to feel happy.
A person who stops to think and live a meaningless life is getting old.
A person who stops to think and live a meaningless life is getting old.
>>A person who stops thinking would live a meaningless life as he/she grows old.
We should think \'what makes me happy? what I want to do?\'.
We should think \'what makes me happy? what I want to do?\'.
>>We should ask questions like; \"what would make me happy?, \"what do I want to do?\"
When I do work what I want to do I can be happy.
When I do work what I want to do I can be happy.
>>When I do something that I really like, I can be happy.
If I will stop my work and just stay in my home after retirement, I think I\'m so sad.
If I will stop my work and just stay in my home after retirement, I think I\'m so sad.
>>If I will stop my work and just stay in my home after retirement, I think I\'m going to be sad.
So, sometimes I think what I can do after retirement.
So, sometimes I think what I can do after retirement.
>>So, sometimes I think of what else can I do after retirement.
Maybe my third life will begin after retirement.
Maybe my third life will begin after retirement.
>>CORRECT
My second life already began from the marriage with my husband.
My second life already began from the marriage with my husband.
>>My second life already began when I got married.
When I will die, I hope to conclude I lived very well and I don\'t have any regrets.
When I will die, I hope to conclude I lived very well and I don\'t have any regrets.
>>When I die, I hope to conclude that I have lived a great life with no regrets.
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