11.14 homework
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>> I’d like to give you a situation to act out. You invited your friend to your
house. He or she sent you a message asking you to direct him how to get
to your house from the bus or subway station. Call him or her and explain
how to get to your house in detail.
Hi there? I am glad to that you are coming over for my housewarming today. If you will take the bus, it\'s going to be easy. As soon as you get off the Yunsei University station, take a right turn and cross the street at the crosswalk. Proceed walking for about three mintutes until you can reach my house. If you approach the common entrance of the studio apartment, press the number in door lock and then you take the elevator. Go to the six floor of the union and welcome to my house!
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Hi [이름]^^
Thank you for sending your homework. Speak tomorrow!
Cheers!
Jean
>> I’d like to give you a situation to act out. You invited your friend to your
house. He or she sent you a message asking you to direct him how to get
to your house from the bus or subway station. Call him or her and explain
how to get to your house in detail.
Hi there! I am glad to that you are coming over for my housewarming today.
>> correct
If you will take the bus, it\'s going to be easy.
>> If you take the bus, it will be easy.
As soon as you get off the Yunsei University station, take a right turn and cross the street at the crosswalk.
>> As soon as you get off Yunsei University station, take a right turn and cross the street at the crosswalk.
Proceed walking for about three mintutes until you can reach my house.
>> Continue walking for about three minutes until you reach my apartment building.
If you approach the common entrance of the studio apartment, press the number in door lock and then you take the elevator.
>> If you approach the common entrance of the studio apartment, press the number on the door lock and then take the elevator.
Go to the six floor of the union welcome to my house!
>> Go to the six floor of the union and you have finally arrived. Welcome to my house!
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