11/15(Fri) homework
학생이 쓴 원문
How do you see Korea’s role in the global community?
I think Korea has become a small part of the global community nowadays.
Korea was a developing country in the 1980s.
We have many hardships and crises such as the IMF.
However, Korea overcame many difficulties and grew up so much.
I am very proud of the ancestors\' challenges and achievements.
Also, I feel proud when I hear some news of famous Koreans working abroad.
Some companies, athletes, singers, and actors are working hard abroad and are being recognized for their efforts.
I also want to be a part of my global research field.
When I present my work at an international conference and society, I have a mindset that I am representing Korea.
강사 첨삭
Hi, [이름]!
Thank you for sharing. Korea is known for many great things. I believe this is only the beginning of Korea\'s noble history.
~ Trixia
CONTENT:
I think Korea has become a small part of the global community nowadays.
- I think Korea has become an important part of the global community nowadays.
Korea was a developing country in the 1980s.- CORRECT.
We have many hardships and crises such as the IMF.
We have many hardships and crises such as the IMF.
- We faced many hardships and crises, such as the IMF crisis.
However, Korea overcame many difficulties and grew up so much.- However, Korea overcame these challenges and has grown significantly.
I am very proud of the ancestors\' challenges and achievements.- I am filled with pride of the challenges and achievements of our ancestors.
Also, I feel proud when I hear some news of famous Koreans working abroad.- I also feel proud when I hear about famous Koreans succeeding abroad.
Some companies, athletes, singers, and actors are working hard abroad and are being recognized for their efforts.- Many companies, athletes, singers, and actors are working hard overseas and are being recognized for their efforts.
I also want to be a part of my global research field.- I, too, want to contribute to the global research field.
When I present my work at an international conference and society, I have a mindset that I am representing Korea.- When I present my work at international conferences and forums, I approach it with the mindset that I am representing Korea.
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