11. 15 Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Directions: Answer the question using complete sentences not more than 8.
Question:What is the most dangerous thing in your home? Why is it dangerous?
I live in an an apartment and my house is on 13 floor. So the most dangerous thing in my home is window. Of course there're parapets at each windows but for my cat, it's so dangerous because the space between parapets is wide not for people but for cats. If the screen at a window is opened, my cat can pass through the space and fall off through the space. How dangerous site it is! I always closed the screen for my dear cat.
강사 첨삭
Happy happy Thursday, [이름]!!:)
How are you today?
I bet you are busy just like what you have said!:)
And oh, lucky cat you have!!>-<
Anyway, very good in doing your homework amidst your busyness.
I will see you tomorrow.
~T. Lorna^-^
I live in an an apartment and my house is on 13 floor.
>> I live in an apartment which is located on the 13th floor.
So the most dangerous thing in my home is window.
>> So the most dangerous thing in my home is our windows.
Of course there\'re parapets at each windows but for my cat, it\'s so dangerous because the space between parapets is wide not for people but for cats.
>> Our windows have parapets in each but for my cat, it is very dangerous because he can still penetrate the space.
If the screen at a window is opened, my cat can pass through the space and fall off through the space.
>> If the screen of each windows are opened then my cat can pass through it and he might fall to the ground.
How dangerous site it is!
>> Correct!
I always closed the screen for my dear cat.
>> I always close the screen for my dear cat.
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