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2018-12-03 · 첨삭 강사 Jedah

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[What can you say about Artificial Intelligence? Do you think they would rule the world in the future and eradicate humanity?] I think Yes, AI is already shared our life more than most people think. We can order from home AI to turn on the light or boiler before arriving home. My husband are using AI vacuum cleaner. He check the cleaning load and sometimes reorder to the cleaner by using smartphone application. Many company have AI machinery system, they don’t need many labor, just need human manager. We are listening the music that is selected by AI, they collect my music list and recommend new music that maybe we will like. Human invented AI, but we rely on to it so much, I also. I think it can be control my mind for a long time if it want. But, from now, it is impossible to do not use AI. So, I think the new application of AI should be serious and AI also is managed by human.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]! Thank you for taking time in doing your homework. I appreciate it a lot! ^ ^

Wonderful thoughts on this one. You are right! The use of AI is everywhere. It has become an important part in our daily lives, and it\'s used in a wide area. The AI is programmed to do something beneficial, but if it falls into the wrong hands, it\'s capacity of doing something destructive and devastating is big! I hope it wouldn\'t reach that far! ^ ^

-Teacher Jedah

I think Yes, AI is already shared our life more than most people think.

>>I think yes, AI has influenced our lives more than most people think.
We can order from home AI to turn on the light or boiler before arriving home.

>>We can give an order to an AI to turn on the light or boiler before we arrive home.
My husband are using AI vacuum cleaner.

>>My husband is using an AI vacuum cleaner.
He check the cleaning load and sometimes reorder to the cleaner by using smartphone application.

>>He checks the cleaning load and sometimes gives an order to the cleaner by using a smartphone application.
Many company have AI machinery system, they don’t need many labor, just need human manager.

>>Many companies have AI machinery systems, they no longer need manpower just one person who can manage everything.
We are listening the music that is selected by AI, they collect my music list and recommend new music that maybe we will like.

>>We listen to songs that is selected by an AI, they collect our song lists and recommends new songs that we may like.
Human invented AI, but we rely on to it so much, I also.

>>Humans invented AI, and we rely so much on it.
I think it can be control my mind for a long time if it want.

>>I think I can control myself using the AI for a long time if I want.
But, from now, it is impossible to do not use AI.

>>But, for now, it is impossible to not use AI.
So, I think the new application of AI should be serious and AI also is managed by human.

>>So, I think the new application of AI should be serious and AI is also managed by humans.

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