11.15Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Hi ma'am! Good morning!
Today is Friday that we have been looking foward to. I hope you have a great weekend.
Homework
What is your favorite TV show?
Normally,I don't watch TV show much. But sometimes, I watch TV at weekend evening.
My favorite TV show is two section.
One is comedy show and the other is health-related one. Comedy show gives me a lot of relaxation. It is so comfortable and interesting for me.
Besides,I can get some sort of useful imformations from health-related TV program.
I think,it is good for my healty.
Thank you! Have a nice weekend!
강사 첨삭
Hello Mr. [이름]! Thank you for sharing your favorite TV shows with me. I think that I\'m getting to know you more each time that you answer my question. Thank you Sir! Anyway, enjoy your weekend!
~t. KELLY~
Hi ma\'am! Good morning!
>> Correct.Today is Friday that we have been looking foward to.
>> Today is Friday, the day that we have been looking forward to.
I hope you have a great weekend.>> I hope you will have a great weekend.HomeworkWhat is your favorite TV show?Normally, I don\'t watch TV show much.
>> Normally, I don\'t watch TV much.
But sometimes, I watch TV at weekend evening.
>> But sometimes, I watch TV on weekends.My favorite TV show is two section.
>> I have two favorite TV shows.One is comedy show and the other is health-related one.
>> One is a comedy show and the other is health-related show.
Comedy show gives me a lot of relaxation.
>> Correct.
It is so comfortable and interesting for me.
>> Correct.Besides,I can get some sort of useful imformations from health-related TV program.>> Besides, I can get some sort of useful imformation from health-related TV programs.
I think,it is good for my healty.
>> I think it is good fo my health.Thank you! Have a nice weekend!
>> Correct.
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