11.15Homework

2013-11-15 · 첨삭 강사 Kelly

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Hi ma'am! Good morning! Today is Friday that we have been looking foward to. I hope you have a great weekend. Homework What is your favorite TV show? Normally,I don't watch TV show much. But sometimes, I watch TV at weekend evening. My favorite TV show is two section. One is comedy show and the other is health-related one. Comedy show gives me a lot of relaxation. It is so comfortable and interesting for me. Besides,I can get some sort of useful imformations from health-related TV program. I think,it is good for my healty. Thank you! Have a nice weekend!

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Hello Mr. [이름]! Thank you for sharing your favorite TV shows with me. I think that I\'m getting to know you more each time that you answer my question. Thank you Sir! Anyway, enjoy your weekend! ~t. KELLY~ Hi ma\'am! Good morning! >> Correct.Today is Friday that we have been looking foward to. >> Today is Friday, the day that we have been looking forward to. I hope you have a great weekend.>> I hope you will have a great weekend.HomeworkWhat is your favorite TV show?Normally, I don\'t watch TV show much. >> Normally, I don\'t watch TV much. But sometimes, I watch TV at weekend evening. >> But sometimes, I watch TV on weekends.My favorite TV show is two section. >> I have two favorite TV shows.One is comedy show and the other is health-related one. >> One is a comedy show and the other is health-related show. Comedy show gives me a lot of relaxation. >> Correct. It is so comfortable and interesting for me. >> Correct.Besides,I  can get some sort of useful imformations from health-related TV program.>> Besides, I  can get some sort of useful imformation from health-related TV programs. I think,it is good for my healty. >> I think it is good fo my health.Thank you! Have a nice weekend! >> Correct.

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